My poetic response to Raquel’s thoughtful post >> https://lavidaraq.com/2024/03/28/pick-up-the-phone

Who’s Listening (a Senryu)
Looking at my phone
Hoping for that ringing tone
Feeling all alone

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Neat and poignant
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Thank you Derrick
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So sweet.
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Thanks Sadje
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My pleasure
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A creative response and fabulous song selection, Ivor. โ๏ธ
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Thank you Robbie, and Iโm an avid Blonde fan from way back ๐ถ๐๐
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You’re welcome. Robbie is a fine name, however mine is Michele. ๐ ๐ถ๐๐ป
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A powerful poem that is so relatable to so many people.
The phone is such a wonderful way to stay connected. ๐
Isn’t it amazing how much phones have changed in our lifetimes! ๐ฎ ๐
(((HUGS))) โค๏ธโ๐๐ฑโค๏ธ
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Thank you Carolyn โฆ and here I am on my little iPhone chatting to you in America โฆ and I am always amazed at how it happens!! ๐ฑ๐๐๐๐ถ
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Yes this quiet phone.. until you respond ๐ love the song and poem.. thank you!
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Thank you Raquel for โringingโ my thoughts ๐ฑ๐๐๐
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Brrriiiinnnggggโฆ Nice Senryu, Ivor. A watched phone never rings ๐
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Youโre certainly right about that Ryan ๐ฑ๐
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Beautifully penned, Ivor! ๐
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Thank you kindly Eugenia ๐๐๐
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My pleausre, Ivor!
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I’ve felt like that in the past. Definitely didn’t enjoy feeling unheard!
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Thank you for appreciating my words, Carol
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