Throwback Friday, Knots On Blue Paper Lines

This week’s Throwback Friday poem has been hidden away for five years and is not in any of my published books. I originally wrote the piece in August 2019 and “as is my way” I have revised the poem for today’s article.



Knots On Blue Paper Lines

Eyelids are heavy and tired
Overcome by the dazzle of razzle
My palms are open but empty
Anxiously yearning to turn another page

This mind of mine feels worn and torn
Time is constantly tick-tocking away
Chiming between today and tomorrow
While the poet’s pen is scrawling
Knots on blue paper lines
Hanging them out, to dry and die

My arms are quietly fluttering
Searching for yesterday’s wings
As I meander through my journey
Pondering how much reality stings


I think the lyrics of the β€˜Airbourne Toxic Event’s’, song below, are profoundly outstanding and well worth reading as you listen to the tune.”












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Ivor Steven (c) July 2024

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

18 thoughts on “Throwback Friday, Knots On Blue Paper Lines”

  1. Thank you for sharing this hidden gem with us! It is a marvelous, powerful pairing with THAT song! Such a relatable message in your poem that evokes emotions within the heart.
    (((HUGS))) for you and Sir Frankie!! ❀️❀️

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    1. Thank you for your wonderful words Carolyn… the poem is from after my strokes and my trip to America/Philadelphia, and I had a relapse/blackout … and wondered if I was able to cope with things … 😊😍😍🎢

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    1. Thank you for your very beautiful comments Nancy … sometimes introspectively I ponder about my inabilities, or are they my disabilities β€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή

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