Today my βThrowback Fridayβ poem, is from June 2019, and again, as is my way, I have slightly revised the original piece.
Black Snow Thaws In The Winter Sun (Revised)
Iβve no more secret words of sorrow
Only old lines Iβve borrowed
I found them in a poetβs dusty booklet
The pages were tattered, like Grandmaβs cookbook
Hidden in the familyβs sacred cabinet
Faded words that now appear outdated
Years of love and dreams relegated
Stored away, but prudently not wasted
My road ahead is now cleared of black snow
The night is not always dark, you know?


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This is beautiful Ivor π
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Thank you for your kind words Willow πππ
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I love it! This line in particular.
I found them in a poetβs dusty booklet
The pages were tattered, like Grandmaβs cookbook
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Thank you for your kind words and I’m glad you liked this one, Dwight
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You are welcome!
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A lovely poem Ivor
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A wonderful revision! A beautiful read! π
(((HUGS))) β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you very much Carolyn ..ππππΆ
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Nicely positive
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Thank you kindly Derrick
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Oh beautiful
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Thank you βΊοΈ
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