


๐๐๐ข๐ค๐ฎ, my submission
๐๐ญโ๐ฌ ๐๐ง๐ญ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ฅ ๐๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ง๐ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ
๐๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ฏ๐ข๐ญ๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐ข๐ค๐ฎ ๐ฉ๐จ๐๐ฆ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐๐ฌ.
“The light of opportunity will sweep swiftly and you should get your poem to Geelong Writers by Friday 16 August. Please use the basic 5-7-5 syllable form. Your response will be sent to the Queenscliff Maritime Museum for display as part of the museumโs celebration of International Lighthouse Weekend.”
Above Dark Waves (a Haiku)
The sea grows darker
Is the light glowing brighter?
Above these wide waves


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Nicely done. Great question!
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Thank you kindly Dwight โฆ
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A fabulous haiku, Ivor.
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Thank you kindly Robbie
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A wonderful haiku, Ivorโฃ๏ธ
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Thank you for your kind words Cindy โฆ ๐ค๐๐๐
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Nice poem, Ivor. Excellent song choice too (it’s regularly played at my church).
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Thank you very much for your kind words and I’m pleased I chose the right song …
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely haiku, dear Ivor! โก
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Thank you kindly dear Nancy โค๏ธ๐
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Very welcome, Ivor. โก๐
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Very well done. An all round good post
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Thank you very much for your kind words derrick
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A fabulous trio…photos, poem and song/vid!
Your Haiku poem shares a powerful, ponderful image! I love that it has traveled to be read by many people! ๐
I’ve visited some lighthouses and they just fascinate me!
I love that we human-beans can be like lighthouses…we can live with light, helping others to navigate rough challenging times. ๐
(((HUGS))) โฏ๐๐โฏ๐๐โฏ
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Thank you Carolyn … as it happens, I’m needing a lighthouse beacon to show me the way … I’ve worn myself out, and nearly exhausted … Open mic on Thursday night … a huge day of writing submissions on Friday … and today was the Creative Geelong Market … needless to say, a shining light leading me to my bed, is the cosy place I’m looking … ๐๐๐๐ด๐๐
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I hope you got (get) some sleep and good rest!
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Yes โฆ asleep at 10 and awake at 8 โฆ. 10 hours and Iโm feeling fine ๐๐๐
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Iโm always fascinated by lighthouses.
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I am too Sadje, … all around the world they are recognized as that shiny beacon to guide us home …
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Indeed ๐๐ผ
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Wonderful
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Thank you …
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Beautifully written, Ivor!
the light grows brighter
the lighthouse stands tall and proud
a purposeful glow
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Thank you for lovely response Eugenia ๐๐๐
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You’re welcome, Ivor. ๐
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I enjoyed your poem and the music!
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Thank you Dwight โฆ and yes, one of Van Morrisonโs best ๐ถ
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