



Thanks to Mad Missy, of MAD – Works blog site (https://mad-missy-work.blog/2024/11/23/embracing-the-struggle/).
I wrote a poetic response to her thoughtful poem, “Embracing the Struggle”, which I later edited to create my poem ‘Thoughts Winnow Into Words’
Thoughts Winnow Into Words
Words waver and wander around
In the weighty shadows of the whispering moon
And we warily wonder why
But there’s no need to worry
Thoughts winnow into words
When wistful eyes hear sound


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this is lovely Ivor! ❤ wonderful poetic response!
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Thank you very much Carol 😊😍🌏📘
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wonderful alliteration, Ivor
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Thank you for that Robbie… I using words beginning with “W”, 😊😍🌏
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🌈💕
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So very beautiful
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Thank you very much, Sadje 📖🌏😍
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You’re welcome ☺️
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wow to your words
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Thank you kindly, Beth … my witty words don’t always flow so willingly …
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Ivor,
I like the alliteration in this. Keep shining your light.
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Thanks kindly, Ali … I like playing with “W” words, 😊📖🌏📘
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What a lovely alliteration!
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Thank you for your kind words, Dale … some not so worldly words of wisdom from Ivor … 🌏
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😊
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Wonderful alliterative poem, dear Ivor! 💙🌏🌝
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Beautiful Ivor.
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Thank you kindly, Cindy
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Your poems filled with alliterations are so wonderful, so winsome, so worthy of note. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂 🇼 🙂
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Thank you for your warm and wonderful words, Carolyn … 🌏💙📘🎵
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You’re welcomely welcome! 🙂
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Why am I searching for w words?
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“W” … the most interesting part of the dictionary …
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