


My Broomstick (a Tanka)
The afternoon moon
Peers into my room, and says
“Where is your broomstick?
Twilight is beckoning you
To fly beyond your self-doubts”


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go as far as you can go….
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As far as my broomstick will carry me
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Hi Ivor, I really like this poem.
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Thank you kindly,Robbie β¦ an escapism piece, to fly on my broomstick, away from my self-imposed doubts β¦ πππ
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:>)
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Love your poem. Makes me want to ride a broomstick into the night. π
Daylight – one of my favorites. I stayed here long enough to listen to the entire song!
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and Iβm happy you enjoyed my music/video choice, Maddie π€ππ
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What a fabulous tanka, dear Ivor. I love it! ππ§Ήπππ
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Thank you, Iβm so pleased you enjoyed this one Nancy ππ
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Wait, Ivor, I’ll join you. I am sick of self-doubts and need an escape.
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Yes! … but it’s an unsteady broomstick, Punam …
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I’ll get mine, don’t worry! π§Ήπ
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And, with that broom, you’d, swept out, all your, doubts, and, set that broom, free, to, fly into the, skies!
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That’s a lovely scenario …
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A beautiful poem
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Thank you very much, Sadje πππ
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Youβre most welcome
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Thanks, and sorry I’ve not been to your site lately … WP have updated the format of my site and I’m having difficulty adjusting … I’m getting there slowly!
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Youβre welcome. No worries my friend
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I find your poem beautiful, sweet, and heart-touching, Ivor! Beautiful photos and song choice, too! A lovely trio!
And I am so glad that the moon is so good to all of us…if we will just remember to listen and commune with the moon. π I’m so glad the moon is an encouraging force. It shines brightly even during its waning phases, reminding us Human-Beans that we can still inspire other people even when we feel less than perfect (or less than full π).
(((HUGS))) π πππ
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Thank you very much for your amazing comments, Carolyn … as always, the moon continues to encourage and inspire my words … ππππππΆππππ
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A powerful thought
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Thank you for your kind words, Derrick
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Nice
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One only must choose to climb aboard in order to have the trip of a lifetime!
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Climb aboard β¦ like the Galleon Ship, a trip of magical dreams
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Perfect! π
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