Thanks For the Dance, or My Foot Went Numb (a Rhyming Tu-aiku)
My fingers are thumbs
I cannot pick up the crumbs
Nor pluck the ripe plums
My right foot went numb
Her eternal dance did come
Life is a hum-drum
Ivor Steven (c) May 3rd, 2025
Thanks For the Dance, or My Foot Went Numb (a Rhyming Tu-aiku)
My fingers are thumbs
I cannot pick up the crumbs
Nor pluck the ripe plums
My right foot went numb
Her eternal dance did come
Life is a hum-drum
Ivor Steven (c) May 3rd, 2025
A glorious photograph with description of desperate symptoms in verse
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Thank you for thoughtful words, Derrick
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I can feel the inability to move. The feeling of being disengaged, both in your words and your song choices.
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Thank you very much, Violet ππ
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Losing the one we dance with, is never easy, but, we eventually, will find our ways back to the, dance floor, maybe, first, by ourselves, then, with that someone else, and we will get, used to, dancing, alone, on our own, hopefully…
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Ivor, so so SO beautiful…so so SO heart-touching!
(((HUGS))) πΆππΆ
βYou will lose someone you canβt live without,and your heart will be badly broken, and the bad news is that you never completely get over the loss of your beloved. But this is also the good news. They live forever in your broken heart that doesnβt seal back up. And you make it through. Itβs like having a broken leg that never heals perfectly…that still hurts when the weather gets cold, but you learn to dance with the limp.β – Anne Lamott
“If I could have just one more dance with her, I would pick a song that never ends.” – Unknown
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Thank you very much for the two lovely quotes and your kind words, Carolyn πππΆ β¦ Frankie and I went to the cemetery today, and Frankie was the perfect, gentle and respectful companion during our memorial visit πππΆπΊ
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You’re welcome!
I’m not surprised to hear about Frankie being Frankie! π He is such a wonderful friend! π β€οΈ
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Ohh written from heart
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Thank you kindly … ππ
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