An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Tired, Wrinkled, and Wordless
Tired, Wrinkled, and Wordless
I’m too tired to wiggle my toes And pack my wrinkled clothes I’m wordless at the moment My thoughts are on postponement
I twist and roll over Music wiggles inside my head My somersault of dreams Wrinkles my bedspread Upside down Tiredness falls out of my seams Words tumble around Nameless titles and endless tunes abound
A new moon’s brewing Singing the blues, Over my empty town I twist and roll over again I’m back where I started, I hear my angel humming, Hallelujah
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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33 thoughts on “Tired, Wrinkled, and Wordless”
I hear ya Ivor! I’m tired too today! It is one of those lazy days! 🤣🤣😁😁
Your poem gave me a good chuckle, dear Ivor. I am a champion sleeper; very little keeps me from falling asleep and staying asleep. I may not sleep long but I sleep well. Except for the past two nights because of this damn prednisone I’m taking for a torn tendon in my wrist. My brain cells are doing a jitterbug and show no sign of slowing down. Thank goodness for dictation! Have yourself a wondrous sleep tonight, dear Poet. 😴🛌🎶💙
Ivor, you’re not too tird to write a delightful, clever poem! The excitment of the coming trip should be enough to keep you awake, but rest up just in case!
Aw. I hope you get some good rest AND good sleep over the next few days, Ivor! Please keep making that a priority. Love your title! We all have THOSE days. 🙂
A perfect poem that has clever word-pics, relatable emotions…’tis brilliant, and marvelous! It made me smile and giggle as I have “been there/done that/felt like that”.
A song that is always heart-touching and soul-encouraging! 🙂 (Thank you, Mr. Cohen! 🙂 )
(((HUGS))) and ❤️❤️❤️
Good morning, Carolyn, yeah, I’ve slept until 8.30. I had a big day out yesterday, which was another good test for my recovery process. Today my sister and her hubby are taking me out for a Bon Voyage lunch … thank you for your wonderful words about my poem, and yes, thank you, Mr Cohen … 🤗🛩🇨🇦🌏😍🎶🐶💕
I hear ya Ivor! I’m tired too today! It is one of those lazy days! 🤣🤣😁😁
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I’m excited and old
Wrapped in a blindfold
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I am saving this line for use in conversation- My thoughts are on postponement- you are so clever, Ivor!
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Haha, I’m too tired to be clever 😊📖😴
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rest up, you have adventure ahead
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I’m resting while I’m resting 😴
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Your poem gave me a good chuckle, dear Ivor. I am a champion sleeper; very little keeps me from falling asleep and staying asleep. I may not sleep long but I sleep well. Except for the past two nights because of this damn prednisone I’m taking for a torn tendon in my wrist. My brain cells are doing a jitterbug and show no sign of slowing down. Thank goodness for dictation! Have yourself a wondrous sleep tonight, dear Poet. 😴🛌🎶💙
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Sleep time is an unwritten line 😴😊🌏😍
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Love that, dear Poet. You are the Wizard of Wit. 🎩 🪄 💛
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This Witt wizard is a sleepy old lizard 🦎😴😍
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Nite nite! 😴
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Love this my friend!
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Thank you very much, Claudia
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Ivor, you’re not too tird to write a delightful, clever poem! The excitment of the coming trip should be enough to keep you awake, but rest up just in case!
🎶❤️😄🩵 🌏🎶
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Thank you kindly, Cheryl, and I’ve had a lovely long sleep in this morning, and yes, the excitement of it all is kicking in.. 🛩🇨🇦🎶😍🤗🌏🐶💕
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Rest. You’ve been looking forward to this trip for so long. But if you don’t feel up to it, postpone it until you’re well enough to enjoy it.
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Oh, I’ll be fine, I had a big day out yesterday, another good test for my recovery process and I’ve had a good long sleep in this morning … 🤗🌏🛩🇨🇦💕😍
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Oh, happy to hear it. Almost time and I know how excited you are. Going to be a lot of fun.
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Suitcase is packed and ready to go!! … Wednesday midday … ✈🌏
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Aw. I hope you get some good rest AND good sleep over the next few days, Ivor! Please keep making that a priority. Love your title! We all have THOSE days. 🙂
A perfect poem that has clever word-pics, relatable emotions…’tis brilliant, and marvelous! It made me smile and giggle as I have “been there/done that/felt like that”.
A song that is always heart-touching and soul-encouraging! 🙂 (Thank you, Mr. Cohen! 🙂 )
(((HUGS))) and ❤️❤️❤️
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Good morning, Carolyn, yeah, I’ve slept until 8.30. I had a big day out yesterday, which was another good test for my recovery process. Today my sister and her hubby are taking me out for a Bon Voyage lunch … thank you for your wonderful words about my poem, and yes, thank you, Mr Cohen … 🤗🛩🇨🇦🌏😍🎶🐶💕
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Take care and I hope you feel better soon.
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Thank you, I’m feeling betterer this morning, Sadje …
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That’s good. Take plenty of nourishing food.
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You sound miserable, I’m so sorry–I keep you (and everyone) in my fervent prayers.
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Not so tired today, now that I’ve had a long, long sleep in, Rene
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Good for you! Sleep is not a luxury, it’s a requirement.😊
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I’ve got 3 more nights sleep to go, I’ll be good by Wednesday 😊🌏🇨🇦
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Just take it easy, friend!
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Stay well for your trip
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I cannot help but ponder the what’s what if you DID have the words 😉
Nicely done!
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The words always seem to flow, Dale 📖😊😍🌏🇨🇦
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I don’t doubt that, either 😉
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