Dark Grains of Sand

Twilight has a way of softening the edges of the day. In that fading light, time feels loose in the hands, slipping grain by grain. Dark Grains of Sand follows that quiet fall into evening.





Dark Grains of Sand


As the sun sinks
beyond the land,
the horizon’s sky swirls
like tanned quicksand.

As the night begins to melt
into tawny strands,
twilight unfurls across
the wandering bard’s grandstand.

As the grains of time
drift through his hands
the encroaching darkness
remains unmanned and unplanned.





Bob Dylan’s β€œEvery Grain of Sand” drifts through the same twilight hush β€” a perfect echo for this piece.





Ivor Steven ©  July 2026

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

7 thoughts on “Dark Grains of Sand”

    1. Thank you so much for your lovely appraisal of my article … Bob Dylan’s magnificent work song really echoed the essence of my evocative poem πŸ€—πŸ₯°πŸ“–πŸŒ

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    1. Thank you so so much for your lovely words my dear friend … and while I was writing this piece Bob Dylan’s song was already in my mind πŸ“–πŸŽΆπŸ₯°πŸŒπŸ€—

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