I nearly deleted this photo — a pole in the way, a couple of wires cluttering the frame — until the birds decided to rescue it. They swooped in, sketched their own storyline across the sky, and left me wondering who was really directing the scene. While they painted truth up there, I stayed down here trying to catch whatever tale fluttered past. This little poem followed soon after, curious, a bit cheeky, and happily poles apart.
Poles Apart
We’re poles apart
before we even start.
You guys up there,
me down here —
I don’t know where.
Truth flutters freely in the air.
Meanwhile, down here,
fiction is both oblong and square.
Wise cracks don’t need stairs.
Poetic knack has dare and flair,
and down here
storybooks fly anywhere
without a compere,
traveling from deckchair to airchair.
And as the birds drift off into their own truth, this tune keeps the sky talking.
Ivor Steven © September 2026

Bravo, my dear friend! This is glorious in every way! 🥰
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Thank you for all of your lovely words my dear friend 🥰💕🌏📘
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You are most welcome; they come from the heart. 🥰
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You have a beautiful heart ❤️
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Ivor–I am so glad you did not delete this wonderful photo! Look at the beauty of a poem you were able to write. ‘from deckchair to airchair’….so lovely.
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Thank you for your very appropriate words, Lois … and yes, the “undeleted” photo proved to be a fabulous prompt 🥰
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The photograph turned into a keeper
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I hesitated on the delete button just long enough, Derrick
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Great shot and thank you to all the birds there are, for helping us out.
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Yes, birds continue to inspire my metaphorical poems 📖🦅
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Your bird photography is getting better Ivor
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Haha, I take so many photos, some of them accidentally turn out ok, Brian
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Same here Ivor 😂
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What a cool shot, my friend! Sometimes we get lucky!
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Haha, yes, an accidental cool shot my friend
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That it is…!
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What an insightful point of view.
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so lively and they clearly wanted to be in the shot –
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Yes, the birds knew more than me
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So beautifully written! The birds look so lively in this wonderful shot. 👍
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Thank you very much, and luckily I kept the shot instead of deleting it 🥰😉
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You’re most welcome 🥰😉
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Beautiful Ivor …so glad you didn’t delete the photo 💡
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What a delightful and imaginative piece! The birds truly transformed an ordinary photo into something magical. “Poles Apart” is clever, playful, and beautifully written. 👏❤️
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