In the hush before dawn, the poet’s desk waits — ink, paper, and silence mingling with the faint hum of a song. “Last Rites” plays softly, and the night’s spell lingers just long enough to ask: how deep is my well?
How Deep Is My Well
Inside my pastel grey cell,
where the poet’s pencils dwell,
I stumbled over the inkwell
and felt a dank, dark swell
run down my silk lapel.
“Help!” I yell.
My cocoon’s inner shell
has become as black as hell.
“Please! Ring the hotel bell
Perhaps the night-shift personnel
will know how to quell
this bewitching writer’s spell.”
From here, the ink settles… and this song becomes the last whisper of the night.
Ivor Steven © September 2026

Live this perfect pairing of song and poem, my dear friend! 💙🥰🎶
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Thank you so much, and the new Amble song was indeed a perfect fit for my whimsical poem my friend 🎶📖🥰
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It absolutely was! My great pleasure, dear friend. 🥰
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This really touched me, Ivor. There’s such a quiet depth and tenderness in your words the kind that makes you stop, read again, and reflect on your own heart and memories. Beautifully expressed, my friend. ❤️
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Sorry, I just found your lovely comments in spam … thank you so much for appreciating my thought-evocative poem, Mihran
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Sounds like your are visiting “Hotel California”
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Oh, I could have been anywhere at that time of night, Dwight
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Lucky you have the spell
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A fine metaphor
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Thank you very much, Derrick
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Beautifully written poem.
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Thank you kindly, Sadje
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You’re most welcome
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Excell-ent, Ivor! 🙂
This poem, and your last one, have been so fabulous, so rhyme-y, so flow-y! So great to read aloud! 🙂 (((HUGS))) and ❤️❤️❤️
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Yeah … thank you so much for your fabulous compliments, Carolyn … 📘📃💙🌏😍🐶💛🥰
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An inkwell stumbled into at dawn, ink running down silk like the night itself bleeding into daylight. ‘How deep is my well?’ and Ivor, you’ve answered it perfectly. Deep enough to stain everything it touches, dark enough to become ‘as black as hell,’ persistent enough to need the night-shift staff to help you quell it. That’s a poet’s well right there. Beautiful. 💙
/ Love & Hugs / Khadija 💕🤗
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Thank you so much for appreciating my introspective poem about writing poetry deep into the darkest hour of the night … however, at 75, best I curtail this wearying bad habit, Khadija 🥰📝😎🌏🌒
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Love your whimsical poem, and your music selection is the perfect pairing. 💖👌
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Thank you very much , Eugi … it’s midnight here again, best I hop into bed before I trip over the inkwell again 😉
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You’re welcome, Ivor. Sweet dreams, my friend. 💤
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loved your poem Ivor 🙌💕🙌💕
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