An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Presiding (a Haiku)
Some poems arrive quickly, while others rest patiently in the drafts. After a quiet wait of a few weeks, this haiku seemed ready to take its place among recent reflections on nature and birds.
Presiding (a Haiku)
Here I calmly be Overseeing twilight time The day’s final stand
Today’s haiku is accompanied by Glen Hansard’s beautiful live performance of “Her Mercy”, a song that seemed to share the poem’s quiet patience and reflective spirit.
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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So wonderful, Ivor! π
I always felt like my poems were “born”…some had a quick birth and others had a l-o-n-g labor before the birth. π
Beautiful photos, poem and music/song! π I’ve always enjoyed Mr. Hansard’s music.
(I was sad when he passed. π¦ )
(((HUGS))) and β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Yes, I was devastated by Glenβs unfortunate passing β¦ As you know, birds constantly inspire and my first line explains it all for me
βHere I calmly beβ
Thank you so much, Carolyn π₯°π¦ ππ€ππΆ
*applause!*
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Bravo! A lovely poem! β€
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Thank you, Carol π₯°π
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Nice haiku
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Thank you so much π
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You’re welcome π
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Worth the wait!
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Simply perfect, my dear friend. π₯°
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I always wondered, is perfect betterer than excellent β¦ π₯°π€
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Subject to definition and opinion. π
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Nice.
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Thanks, Andrew
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You’re welcome.
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and it flew right in when it was ready at last. thanks for the glen song, i still am so sad that he is gone
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So wonderful, Ivor! π
I always felt like my poems were “born”…some had a quick birth and others had a l-o-n-g labor before the birth. π
Beautiful photos, poem and music/song! π I’ve always enjoyed Mr. Hansard’s music.
(I was sad when he passed. π¦ )
(((HUGS))) and β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Yes, I was devastated by Glenβs unfortunate passing β¦ As you know, birds constantly inspire and my first line explains it all for me
βHere I calmly beβ
Thank you so much, Carolyn π₯°π¦ ππ€ππΆ
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An especially good last line
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Thank you for your kind words, Derrick
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Wonderful, Ivor! Great photos too! π
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Thank you very much, Punam π₯°π
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My pleasure, Ivor. π€π
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