Throwback Friday, Followed By Two, featuring Part 2, “An Answer Follows”

I wrote this poem in November 2017 during one of my neuralgia attacks. At the time, I genuinely felt as though I was approaching the end of the road. Yet, in the end, it could not happen. There was simply too much love surrounding me. The poem was written in two parts, and for Part 2, “An Answer Follows”, my dear friend Terry Fielding later composed a song using those words. The audio recording is included below.

What began as a poem during a difficult time was later transformed into song by my dear friend, Terry Fielding.


Throwback Friday, Followed By Two, featuring Part 2, “An Answer Follows”

Part 1. One Day Follows

The abyss is bigger, not less
On these days of darkness
The owls are singing sad tunes
On these days of bad moons
The brain is harpooned again
On these days of constant pain
The sunshine has gone, I confess
On these days of over stress
The mind has little attitude
On these days of sleepy solitude

Part 2. An Answer Follows

You’ve all walked into my heart
And you’ve run into my past
You’ve all flooded into my soul
And you’ve soared into my dreams
I crave that … one day soon
Tomorrow, or another day too
That all your kind hearts
Will be bathing themselves
In the soothing oils
Of your glorious souls





Music has long been part of Terry’s life. Before listening to our collaboration, enjoy this performance of The Fields of Athenry, recorded in his home studio.



Until Eyes Hear Sound

Amazon >> Amazon.com : Until Eyes Hear Sound

Lulu Books >> Until Eyes Hear Sound (lulu.com)




Perceptions:

Amazon >> Perceptions : Steven, Ivor, Knight, Derrick: Amazon.com.au: Books
Lulu Books >> Perceptions (lulu.com)



Tullawalla:

Amazon >> Tullawalla A Meeting Place Where My Empty Hands are Full of Memories and Rhymes : Steven, Ivor: Amazon.com.au: Books


OR: >> You may email me directly for a signed copy at
ivorrs20@gmail.com … and I can send you a PayPal invoice
for the Book, plus Postage.



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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

7 thoughts on “Throwback Friday, Followed By Two, featuring Part 2, “An Answer Follows””

    1. Thank you for appreciating my friend’s song … oh, I hope your bad days are not too bad, a few times I did have to go to hospital my friend πŸ₯°πŸ€—πŸŽΆπŸ“–

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