Feature Image Above: A pale, gold sun, a held breath, a path unfolding —and a quiet truth still finds its way through.
Early yesterday morning, I read Gigi’s fierce and tender poem, and something in her words stirred an old ache of my own. What began as a quick response grew into this small reckoning — a quiet look at age, longing, and the goals that slip beyond our grasp.
Gigi >> FYI… | Rethinking Life
Behold
As I grow old
the heart goes cold,
so I am told.
I’ve never been bold,
nor has life been gold.
Dreams remain deep in my soul —
and now, as the mind unfolds,
they’re my only stronghold.
I’m yet to be paroled,
and the resolve of my goal
has been lost and sold.
And so I leave these lines here, drifting toward Cohen’s voice, where the narrowing of life becomes its own kind of truth.
Ivor Steven © June 2026

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I can relate, Ivor.
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My dear friend, there is no way your heart, whether old or not, will ever be cold. 🥰
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Ah, it’s a ‘poetic’ cold my friend like void or empty my friend 🥰💕📖
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I don’t think the heart of older people is cold. A lot of people mellow with age.
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Yes, you’re probably right, but mellow didn’t fit my rhyming scheme 🤗📖
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A very moving poem Ivor.
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Thank you for kind words, Sadje
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You’re most welcome
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Your heart has never been cold, my friend
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So heart-touching, relatable, understandable…
AND I am so grateful to get to grow old.
Reading your poem as Mr. Cohen sings is so powerful, Ivor!
(((HUGS))) for you and Sir Frankie!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much for appreciating my introspective poem, Carolyn … 🥰💕🐶🌏📃💛
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A meaningful and touching poem, Ivor. Beautiful music by Leonard Cohen. 💗😍
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Thank you kindly for lovely words, Eugi … yes I’m at that age when every new day is a good day …
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I think there are aspects of age and longing that only exist when hand in hand….
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I know that to be true …
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