My Vision (a Senryu)

A quiet morning reply to Bart’s Fraiku, my worn lenses lifting me toward today’s blurry blue sky.
Bart >> Fraiku: For Your Eyes | Bartholomew Barker, Poet


My Vision (a Senryu)


In front of my eyes
Beyond dust-covered lenses
I pause to see more





And the vision carried on beyond the frame.




Ivor Steven ©  September 2026

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

7 thoughts on “My Vision (a Senryu)”

  3. Sensational reply poem, Ivor!
    Taking time to pause and to see more are wonderful qualities! Amazing what we see, feel, hear, think, and learn when we do. 🙂
    And as eyes age and glasses blur to continue to see with our hearts and souls is the way to live. 🙂
    (((HUGS))) ❤️❤️❤️

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